Charlie II

Heya creativityrules! It's review day, so let's get to this: Rhythm I absolutely love your opening stanza and there's a very specific reason why. Sea flows in, washes out, leaving ...

Private Charlie | Inside the Monkey It was dark. It was dreary. And it was full of splinters. It hadn't taken long for the General to coax and coerce the ...

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Hello there Kyousuke, as requested! Direction It's an interesting prologue. Usually, at least in the books I've read, the Prologue sets the scene and gives details about what is about ...

Hey there Dhanshucool -- I saw you'd only got one review so far, and I thought I'd come along. Story Leaving technicalities aside for a moment, this is actually a ...

You should call this: carbonCore's reviewRequest thread ! :wink: That is all.

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Joshuapaul, good sir. For you. Focus The beauty of these short pieces is that they can be so vivid and powerful. The trouble with these short pieces is that they've ...

Hello Priceless -- this is one of my "specially late" reviews. Ever so sorry about that! Hopefully I can still be of some help! :wink: Twilight Well, yes, this is ...

Nick | The Staryu Fountains “Woah...” Nick’s voice echoed strangely in the sanctum’s interior. He felt like he was in a basin -- gleaming metal surfaces covered most of the ...